Charming

How hot is too hot?

Not Throwing In A Hypothetical

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August 18th, 2018, 4:48 pm

You can only hope.
Crate is a man, btw. 
He's a guy, okay?

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artofjoe, July 22nd, 2018, 8:51 pm

It could be worse somewhere else on smackjeeves

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TheFunTrain, August 20th, 2018, 12:12 pm

This page has everything: Self-aware humor, references to comments not even written at the time, plot confusion, more self-aware references to SmackJeeves. Did several prologue pages come and go? My brain is turning into mush for reasons unrelated, but I could swear some earlier stuff changed.

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artofjoe, August 20th, 2018, 6:06 pm

@TheFunTrain: Oh yeah, I redid the prologue a while back. I got a bunch of reviews that said it looked like garbage.
Also, those past few pages were continuations of earlier flashback scenes. It was showing what happened AFTER Turnip Princess made him his armor.
It's probably going to get worse, so hold on tight.
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